Monday, July 13, 2009

To be 17

It is 8.30 AM on a monday morning.

She is wearing a snug fit jeans and black and white tee. a few strands pulled back by a clip and held in place. She loooks pretty, very pretty, like any 17 year old should look like.

Her regular bus is late, and she is worried...can't be late to class on a monday.
Her eyes are looking beyond the curve, waiting for that red bus to show up,while she mentally assesses herself -" Do i look pretty enough?"

Just ahead , she sees the bike on the road. winding its way through the traffic. Smartly dressed guy on the bike. But ah! helmet. Will he look at her? She shifts a little, facing the road. The traffic slows down, so does he. She looks farther, pretending not to see him slow down. Traffic moves, he moves, not before looking at her. She glances backwards at the last moment and catches him look at her.

She smiled a knowing, playful smile of the one who knows she is being admired.

Neither of them saw the woman sitting in an auto and watching this little act unfold.
In that moment, she made me want to be 17 again.

12 comments:

Anonymous July 13, 2009 at 4:45 PM  

:)

starry eyed July 13, 2009 at 4:59 PM  

*sighs*

Just luuuurve watching teens and their deewangi. Seems it's more exciting to be 17 nowadays, huh?!

nitya July 13, 2009 at 5:59 PM  

You describe so well... creating a little scene clearly and in detail! Enjoyed that.

sole July 14, 2009 at 6:03 AM  

haven't we all gone thorugh those days ;-))inviting yet playful!!

Anonymous July 14, 2009 at 6:57 AM  

I know what you mean. For me being 21 again would be fun, or even 25. Those were some really good times.

Nino's Mum July 14, 2009 at 7:54 PM  

beautiful imagery. I was there too.

In love with my life July 15, 2009 at 3:33 PM  

Richa/ Starry/ Nitya: :-) I loved watching that. It is a magical age right?

Sole:Fun times.When one had nary worry about anything else.

In love with my life July 15, 2009 at 3:33 PM  

Era:17 somehow associates with being a nobody..you know,no work pressure, no family pressure.

NM: I hear you:-)

nitya July 21, 2009 at 6:10 PM  

Hey In Love, how is V settling in? Has he got used to his afternoon school?

VJ July 22, 2009 at 4:52 AM  

tagged you !!!

Nino's Mum July 24, 2009 at 12:07 PM  

linked you up here:
http://theninoeffect.blogspot.com/2009/07/footloose-fridays-iv.html

In love with my life July 24, 2009 at 5:17 PM  

Hey Nitya, he seems to have settled in..almost. Thank you.